Ha hah! Just suggestions of course. Ignore it all and no biggie! When I used to help Jim Kramer he used semicolons as colons it used to drive me crazy, but he taught me well about the author’s voice. I ain’t a great editor but I’m a pretty good suggester!
Is the hyphen after "offshoots" meant to just separate the sentence? Wanted to be sure that, and the ellipses at the very end were purposeful. Instead of the hyphen between "offshoots-sprawling" maybe do something like "a dozen or more levels, sprawling haphazardly in all di...
Next up for public preview: Wilderness Preparation Comments welcome! Ooops a wee bit behind here. There's one too many "or"s in the first paragraph :) I'm thinking you might want a comma after "the nearest dungeon" in the second paragraph? Or maybe commas surrounding "or tr...
Garamon takes his place in the marching order heading left (now that Tass has given the all-clear). COVID sucks. My father ended up in the hospital at the end of last week, so I was AFK through the weekend as well, being on Long Island. But the COVID test came back clear at least; though he's wicke...
Oops. Sorry! I misread. The post said adventures!
That’s likely not an issue. Ugh too many RPG forum posts pass through my brain - especially as a paranoid Mod for a couple other forums! (Or is it fora?? )